Egg Composition

Feedback:


  • More contrast with books
  • Sharper lines
  • Make the egg bigger


(accidentally deleted original photo, but this was all that was done)

Final:

Feedback:

  • more emphasis on the page lines
  • more shading on the pages



Final Reflection:

My concept was for the egg to be cracking under the pressure of work. This was based upon the metaphor that people often use of, well, cracking under pressure. Looking back at my work now, I think I should've added more contrast. I did consider adding words on the pages as some people suggested, however I didn't want to mess it up and have to re-do the shading on the open book or the book spines. Also, though some of my feedback was to add more shading to the pages, and though it may have added some of the contrast I'm lacking, the book pages in the reference photo and almost pure white, and I tried to copy that as best as I could. 

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